Sunday, November 1, 2009

Overexposure

Spelled-out
both pain and joy
plainly read
fully digested
for the world to
effortlessly
gulp.

I always forget to
leave something
virgin
between the lines
for me.
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  1. CALLNovember 1, 2009 at 5:21 PM

    "Poetry should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance." - John Keats

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  2. njoeyNovember 2, 2009 at 1:03 AM

    hi ady,
    just a thought...
    if you add
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    between "virgin" and "between these lines", you will have something only "for you"... :)

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